25oct24 fri dis-connecting, @vanres74; 403e20aug24; #newtech; [25oct24 fri]; {25oct24 Thu} 

dis-connecting, @vanres1974 403e20aug24

shortly after

8:00 p.m.

I look around in the crowded bus

all seats occupied

several travel 

standing up

of those 

I am able 

to observe

all but one 

uses a smartphone

he eats

potato 

chips

when he finishes the pack

picks up the phone

too

I stand up

as my destination point

approaches

swiftly 

after

balance myself

new look around

shows another one

without a cellphone in hand

like myself

she stands up

tries to balance herself

she ...

it is time to get off 

time to pause 

the typing 

and ...

https://vanres1974.blogspot.com/2024/10/403i-24%20.html

25oct24 fri dis-connecting, @vanres74; 403e20aug24; #newtech; [25oct24 fri]; {25oct24 Thu} 

403p-24 desconexões, 20, ago, 2024, {24, out, 2024, qui}, [24, oct, 2024, qui]

@vanres2023

20/07/2024

{25, out, 2024}

Antologia: Miríade e Distopia (2004-2024) - edição, by @vanres1974

twitter version:

disconnections

shortly after

8:00 p.m.

I look around in the crowded bus

all seats occupied

several travel 

standing up

of those 

I am able 

to observe

all but one 

uses a ...

continua:

https://vanres1974.blogspot.com/2024/10/403i-24%20.html

Gratitude for sharing!

#poem 

#poetrypeople 

#writerslift 

#poetry

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403p-24 desconexões, 20, ago, 2024, {24, out, 2024, qui}, [24, oct, 2024, qui]

403i-24 disconecting, Aug, 20, 2024, {Oct, 25, 2024, Thu}, [Oct, 25, 2024, fri] 

shortly after

8:00 p.m.

I look around the crowded bus

all seats occupied

several traveling standing

of those 

I am able to observe

only one does not use a smartphone

eats potato chips when finishing the package picks up the phone too I stand up my destination point approaches as I try to balance myself the look to the other passengers shows only another one without a cell phone in her hand like me she stands up and try to balance herself to get off the bus time to pause typing

to get off … @vanres2023 07/20/2024 {24, Oct, 2024} Previous versions

403i-24 disconnections, Aug, 20, 2024, {Oct, 23, 2024, Thu}, [Oct, 25, 2024, Thu]

@vanres2023

20/07/2024

[24, out, 2024

Antologia: Miríade e Distopia (2004-2024) - edição, by @vanres1974

versões anteriores 

403-24 desconexões, 20, ago, 2024, {24, oct, 2024, qui}, [24, oct, 2024, qui]